Sunday, April 15, 2018

Add More Vegetables Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sharing a pizza is fine but having yours alone is a dream
Big or small appetites are suitable for one bite more
A lot of our complaints are settled with a stream
Delectables chosen from a menu, a scream
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Doris Cornago
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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 April 2018

Dear Doris, such a well penned delicious poem my mind has ever eaten....10+++++

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deborrahcornago 16 April 2018

Yes. Let's go on a poem binge, Bro, Thank you for sharing the pizza with me. :)

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Doris 15 April 2018

The breathless sprint at the closing section of the poem reflects the wanton display of greed by a pizza addict, someone like me.: -)

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Lamar Cole 15 April 2018

This is a very delightful poem about add more vegetables.

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Doris 15 April 2018

Making this poem is fun and I never had surfeit yet; I hope not one gets a bellyache from reading my poems or eating pizza - both are vicarious pleasures of our lives. Thank you, Lamar, for sharing my taste.: -)

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Doris 15 April 2018

There is a glitch which comes before the tummy ache, which is just as well, take this moment to reflect if you want another bite more.: -)

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