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Excellent composition 10+++

Good feeling and observation... (I think the second line has 8 syllables as muddy = 2 syllables) . But I like the haiku! Cheers. Subroto

nice one....i like it.....

what an insight... inside a man and an animal... :)

I agree with palash...................cows and animals are more intellegent.............Good Write........

well, men can't go for muddy pools...a vivid village summer scene where cows and muddy pools are in plenty and power supply rare...a scenic haiku...10

Mamta ji, It's such a nice coincidence. Only yesterday I was telling my friend, while driving back home in hot Sun at about 12 PM, looking at the cattle in ponds, that I was very envious of them, You are an expert in catching even the most insignificant thing on earth and mould it into a poem. Kudos to you Madam

Nice haiku, well crafted in juxtaposition verses....................10

full of life and full of raw emotion and feeling..u amazing!