Monday, October 19, 2009
Adaptation Comments
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The burning metallic flames
Blackened me with pain
My scream couldn’t save me
Through my blood fire trained.
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Afzal Shauq
27 October 2009
The burning acupunctured every cell In the suffering I dissolved I could no longer feel No longer cry. good and realisic way written..impressive one..10/10
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10/19/2025 8:17:48 PM # 1.0.0
The burning metallic flames' the single line is a representative of the whole present age. v nice