Saturday, January 14, 2012

Adamant Comments

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I stand without looking within
At the shattered remnants
The inward cost of casual betrayal
By one who pledged to me
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Kathleen Reiman
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Timothy Rosenbaum 14 January 2012

The last line has a powerful ambiguity to it. Lovely.

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Wahab Abdul 14 January 2012

geat poem i like it...the title is appropriate..theme is good, good language has been used too..keep it up please mine

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Kathleen Reiman

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