Thursday, September 21, 2006

Adam Went Fishing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Adam was just turned eighteen
A fisherman by trade
He went out with his father
Six days a week, in their tiny boat
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

This is a masterpiece. I have read so much poetry, but never have I read a poem like this. It reminded me of Sir Walter Scott's writing. You outdid yourself in this poem of yours. I will always remember it as the old man did in the end. Man, you have painted a picture in my head to remember forever. It shall be stored in my gallery up there. STANDING OVATION FOR THIS ONE! ! !

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Otteri Selvakumar 21 September 2006

Adeam went finish.. good finsh for marilyn...!

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