Monday, June 19, 2017

Adam Outside Paradise Comments

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You are Adam first, I was Adam second
The world was born, the sun woke up from the mountain,
Ignited the moonlight, animals have not yet created,
Riverside pavilion rose purple, rock that
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2017

Adam, Adam, have you ever seen the Father's toe? Adam Ah Adam, whether we exist before others, Adam waited for his Eve, lonely to the end of time. a fine presentation of paradise in a different way. very nice poem my dear poet. thank you. tony

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Shimizu Mizuhala 25 June 2017

I'm glad you like it! Thanks!

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