Thursday, February 23, 2006

Adam On The Eve Of Knowing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Adam had just finished his corn flakes
Goat's milk and all

His briefcase was in his hand
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Laurence Overmire
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Not a member No 4 30 December 2006

Hasn't quite finished chewing that mouthful from the apple yet! ? ? Bridging the ages cleverly. Funny and thought provoking authentic poetry.

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Anna Russell 20 March 2006

Hahahahah! ! Very good stuff. Now, if Adam had a job in the 21st century, what do you think it would be? I'll look out for a poem on the subject from you soon! Hugs Anna xxx

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Michael Gale 18 March 2006

What an original and novel idea.Adam eating cornflakes running late for work and forgets his fig leaf. Very imaginative of a poem. I really enjoy reading comedic poetry. This is a very, very good poem. Best regards-Mike Gale.

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