Saturday, January 17, 2015

Adam & Eve (Acrostic) Comments

Rating: 5.0

God made a man, and put him into the garden
Of Eden to dress it and to keep it, and God said,
Don't eat of the tree of knowledge of good and evil, or
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Grace Diane Jessen 28 August 2020

Very clever acrostic poem! Well done!

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Grace Jessen 27 November 2016

I enjoyed this poem and the acrostic format.

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Spock The Vegan 28 November 2016

I have several other acrostics. Geology is Gorgeous is one. Herbs Are... etc.

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Wes Vogler 25 August 2016

VERILY THOU CREATETH AND THOU SHIRKETH NOT.... BRAVO

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Spock The Vegan 28 November 2016

Thanks, Wes

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Spock The Vegan 02 February 2016

Thanks to all of you for your kind words. God bless!

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God said don't eat the fruit A sweet spiritual story that is summarized here in this biblical characters composition/poem. Thanks for sharing my friend!

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Shahzia Batool 09 June 2015

God said don't eat the fruit... A marvelous Acrostic indeed...not only for the beginning points but also for the turning points which carry to the next line with a magical flow....of course, creativity is the gift of The Creator...the poem goes to my poem list...

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Kim Barney 18 January 2015

A well-written poem. I have voted it a ten.

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