Adam & Eve Comments

May I invite you to read my poem Eve?

Wonderful, fabulous, fantastic. I'm out of words, gr8 work :)

Eve, the mother of all living. A beautiful genesis(beginning) poem! God Bless; D

Rhyming, gd style in narrating and expressing ur ideas POwer is in the last line.. Bravo mirna

i like it very much it is really written from ur deep heart but i feel that it isn't enough, beside ur other poems it's alittle weak u need more words 2 express it but it's amazin

Adam&Eve/ a beautiful description! this is the begining of Human Life's Creation, in fact it is based on LOVE ALLAH states: 'It is He Who created you from a single person, and made his mate of like nature, in order that he might dwell with her in love' (7: 189) 10+++ Thanks For Sharing/

The essence and start of humanity in this world...well done! ! !

The way you described the qualities of the first man and woman, is adorable. Keep writing.

Dear Merna, obviously, your poems are reaching a high poetic level, keep it up, this one is a well-penned, you got my vote, keep on writing please, I hope you have the time to read my lately posted poem titled: 'A LOVE'S GAME' if you like it, please comment and rate it, I would kindly appreciated, I added you as a friend if you don't mind, Love and Peace, Romeo (you got my vote for this poem,10+)

wonderful ! fine poetic description! loved it! 10+

excellent............liked it....... ;)

i really like this poem a lot, , it's not smth strange you always write wonderful poems 10++++++++++++++++++

You have poetically explained the essense of our parents. The essense and start of humanity in this world...well done! ! !

A good poem, Merna. The last clinching line is wonderful........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

i loved it so much! ! ! ! ! ur really very talented! !

Eve is the support, warmth and care. And this's a thing that we are of it aware. Eve is the beauty and femininity. She will be our mother for eternity. what a sweet of way of doing poems..and this one is really a very meaningful, rich, preofessionally done poem..liked it very much..10/10

what a beautiful meaningful poem..excellent writing..ended so intillegent..loved it..bravo

Beautiful and vivid, to sum up your beautiful writes.

great poem, keep it up.

your poem is a message which i hope it reaches every human being living on the Earth's surface...we are here to fulfill not to kill...nice writing merna