Adam & Eve Poem by merna ibrahim

Adam & Eve

Rating: 4.7


They are the first people created on this universe.
Because of their existence, we found the earth.
They are the origin of our race.
God created them with a body and face.

Eve is the symbol of women,
Adam is the symbol of men.

Eve is the support, warmth and care.
And this's a thing that we are of it aware.
Eve is the beauty and femininity.
She will be our mother for eternity.

Adam is the bravery, safety and strength.
He tries to penetrate any fence.
Adam is the manhood and will.
He is the one who stand still.

For their ambitions, we are here to fulfill not to kill! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kuji Soliman 21 July 2009

i loved it so much! ! ! ! ! ur really very talented! !

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 July 2009

A good poem, Merna. The last clinching line is wonderful........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Catrina Heart 22 July 2009

You have poetically explained the essense of our parents. The essense and start of humanity in this world...well done! ! !

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Angelica Ayman 22 July 2009

i really like this poem a lot, , it's not smth strange you always write wonderful poems 10++++++++++++++++++

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Shekhar Joshi 22 July 2009

excellent............liked it....... ;)

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May I invite you to read my poem Eve?

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Abdallah Gamal 11 September 2011

Wonderful, fabulous, fantastic. I'm out of words, gr8 work :)

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Eve, the mother of all living. A beautiful genesis(beginning) poem! God Bless; D

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Rania Hammoud 23 January 2010

Rhyming, gd style in narrating and expressing ur ideas POwer is in the last line.. Bravo mirna

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Lina Ehab 27 November 2009

i like it very much it is really written from ur deep heart but i feel that it isn't enough, beside ur other poems it's alittle weak u need more words 2 express it but it's amazin

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