Adam Et Al .....[ Poem Inspired And Encouraged By Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon And His Poem Eve ] Comments

oops! ! ! 'On Eve and I it spat.' SHOULD 'read': 'on Eve and me it spat.' It took LESS THAN two years for me to catch my typo, which I probably won't bother, now, to correct. ;))

Sure, whoever does not care to read this beautiful poem, stand to lose a fantastic poetic experience.

Unni, many thanks for generous comments. Now we'll see if anyone else dares to comment. Hell, maybe no one else will read. It may be THEIR loss more than mine. bri ;) : )

Part 4. "God has an axe to grind" should be an apt title for your next poem.

And I didn't know the role of Serpent in the whole episode. So a factual error crept in in my ‘Eve'. Now I am not correcting it. Let god forgive me. Or, I won't mind spending Eternity in the Hell. Of course, you would be company.😀

Part 2. The overt sarcasm on God is what enjoyed, "After all, garden needed weeding"… It is after all, his garden and he needs to take care of it. So he sides with ‘Serpie', naturally. God, just like humans, can selfish…😀

Wow! That is good! I don't have the analytical or word skills that you possess. But I loved the poem. So beautifully captured the feeling of solitude of Adam