Sunday, November 30, 2008

Adam And Eve Apple Fantasy Comments

Rating: 4.3

I am a bit bored Adam
I am a bit bored Eve
Let's walk together in the garden
This beautiful garden of Eden
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Sherif Monem
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I am bored too

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May I invite you, and all my poet friends, to read my poems (1) Eve and (2) The World Was Only Darker, which might interest all of you. Thank you

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Ramesh Rai 29 April 2015

Apple fantasy of Adam and EVE is nicely penned. Thanks for share

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2013

i always wondered what the real story was. i like it enough to send it to my poemlist. it was convenient that there was at least one fig tree as well. knowing adam, i don't think an apple leaf would suffice. and HERE we are TODAY. good thing i'm not a christian or i might be upset....maybe not.

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This story, this poem, is really male-chauvinistic, and disgusting. Why is it that it is always the woman who sins? I would like to wake you up to the fact that she has not sinned alone.

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I am bored Adam I am bored Eve Let's walk together in the garden It is afternoon Adam after all desires to befullfilled otherwise life will beboredom as ralized by them.. good work and very thoughtful for all the times tocome....10 read mine inflamed mind.. the sun.... how r u/

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Excellent work, love it 10+++

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