Thursday, April 9, 2015

Adam And Eve (And Me) .... [long But Important! ! ; Your Ancestors; Humor; Sharing] Comments

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I awoke [If indeed I was asleep] to a bird song from a tree.
A bright light shone down from the blue sky …. onto me.
I knew not where I was, nor how I came to be.
This was all new, but somehow I KNEW …. I could hear and see.
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Bri Edwards
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Luo Zhihai 20 December 2020

They came from me, NOT Adam, who soon became a nasty lout. Interesting statement!

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Muzahidul Reza 09 March 2018

Yes, you are definitely right to write on Adam and Eve as they are our ancestors, enjoyed it very much, thanks for sharing, + 10 If you please, comment on my poem, Spring In My Native

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Tom Allport 17 June 2017

a very funny poem of a time long before rhyme was invented and where being's with wings pulled the strings, wonderfully invented by Sire Bri? or in cockney slang who would Adam and Eve it all the lads are descended from the big hairy Bri? ...............good story telling poem at it's best Sir Bri of well written.

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