Adam And Eve Comments

Hi So often, the simplicity of truth comes from the mouth of a child. Their real names where Albert and Cynthia, but it didn't have the same ring to it Well Enjoyed Steve

Kids really do say the d a r n d e s t things, especially when they are gifted. I know this will be a treasured memory. Wonderful write. Richard

I like this poem from the soul. Brilliant

excellent theme told in beautiful words conveying all the love...........good [poem

beautiful story, i cant wait to have my own children now.

ah dear Lady.....daughters are indeed so good........at least at setting u up.... this poem only reminds me of a love so close to home whom in search of her own vioce of oppinion has more than once sent me to the walls of ahha did it again, Thanks for the read Dee, and the gentle reminder that it is perfectly normal....

Dee, I smiled at thing remembering some of the lovely questions my own children have asked and still do. They set us up all the time. Wonderful poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Your daughter is just warming up... wait until the tough question start. Nice write. Zen

Dee, Are you asking me to believe, that the ' All Knowing Mom ' , actually let that conversation dropp right there? ... OR that that brilliant child did? What happened to the rest of this? B.V.A.

And will the last person to leave remember to turn out the lights?

Would you Adam and Eve it! (Oh sorry that's UK rhyming slang for 'believe'....) :) - loved this piece Dee. t x

Dee, the simplicity of form adds necessary naivity, even if you didn't set out to do it that way. In that it is delightful. Whether or not there was a 'first' man and woman is a moot point - and you conclude leaving that conjecture unsullied. Rgds, Ivan

ask her whether Adam had a belly button or not. That one drove a few religious scholars insane, I bet. I mean, we're 'made in God's image', right? So... does God have a belly button? -chuck

interesting.................................................................