Your hair draping down
the side of your face
established before my eyes
a silhouette
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if 'all' her hair draped down just one side of her face and you were seeing a silhouette...[i mean a profile, one synonym of silouette]...of the hairy side, you might think: Yikes! a hairy monster. ..............no, scratch what i was just saying! it would not make sense (much) . (cont.)
I painted that image in my mind and molded it into my median, words. Now I want to relive it, again and again........so touching with nice theme. A beautiful poem amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.
Captain Cur was a nonacademic wonder possessing a command of the color of word combinations that describes the perfect poet.
I painted that image in my mind and molded it into my median, words. Now I want to relive it, again and again. - -Art beyond my experience..... a lovely poem creating desire in the intellect of the reader. tony
You certainly painted her in words to never forget a great poem of the female aurora crafted with skill lovely...regards
The last lines now I want to relive it again and again says it all. Pictures of her lush beauty was imposed upon your mind and emotions. Whenever you want to see her again all you had to do was imagine, imagine and imagine..............! Really good Captain.
great imagery...........................a masterpiece...................you did the work whivh vinci did by drawing monalisa...........its beauty spills out from your potrait.loved it
Captain, the imaginations and images in this poem can be framed. I rate this piece of art a 10. Thanks for the comments on My Universe.
You have drawn a beautiful portrait of a female figure whose enticing beauty spills out of the frame! ! Great! !
it tells how female could be a plaited formation of imagination, great cur.
This one is also a portrait poem, i think! a master-piece on ur credit... words -are at ur disposal, set...brick by brick...happy to know your poetry!
You loving, perhaps lustful Capt. I'M heading to sea to see what inspired your fine poetry. Your poems are like paintings
(cont.) Adagio..definition #2? ? 1: a musical composition or movement in adagio tempo.2: a ballet duet by a man and woman or a mixed trio displaying difficult feats of balance, lifting, or spinning. it seems you 'should' drop one of the 'p's in backdropp. i think you are seeing a LOT MORE than i would expect to see in a silouette ** but i'm not terribly poetic nor romantic! ! bri :)