Acts Of Cruelty Comments

great poem, great meaning!

very good afzal saab..entertaining...its an age old ritual this play between man and woman..the pushing away and the deceptions...always make for an interesting write and an even more interesting read..

i liked it alot, all tho if it was me, i would of done the last line reversed, meaning put smile before respond... =].....but i loved it

'So I respond and smile' Rachel Ann Butler

its easy to imagine that escene. its like a short rhymes tale. I am reading you as you an see- regards

a truly amazing piece! ....feels as if there could be an entire story behind it....could be a metaphor or reality....very nice :)

one another unique poem.oh! u deserve this.

You can see the mind working here both on the villains part and your, Nicely put together. I really enjoy when I can spot double meanings 10+++

wonderful, wonderful poem..10

you never fail to amaze me this is reallly a great poem