Tuesday, September 11, 2007

“active” Is Beautiful Comments

Rating: 5.0

Move and feel the energy fading constantly
Until you lose all hope,
Collapsing to the ground,
Like it would mean something,
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Aiden Florence
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Kesav Easwaran 07 May 2009

indepth write... concept too serious for your age...thoughts well presented there...10

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, aryaindia 20 July 2008

You have very different thoughts here, ones that you can relate to life after death or rebirth as you may deem fit. All the same, unusual thought and feel in this work that is astonishing and comprehensible. Thanks, arya.

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Tyease Collins 02 July 2008

Yay nobody commented this yet *collapses* this poem is too great to say anything lol. Luvs ya Cupid-Wonder, -Tyease

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