Sunday, December 29, 2013

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How hard I have tried,
To remove the hard stains,
On my heart and I have used,
The toughest stain remover,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Unwritten Soul 30 December 2013

If it stained in your heart, forgiving and let it go is the best cleaner..it works Silent will cure miserable noise of arguing, but it left echoes in ears While echoes in ears it will replayed in heart and send it to brain by blood but if it is a cloth..use detergent..physically remain? , the best one you do is to cover :) _Soul

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 December 2013

In search of stain remover and disinfectant and old fashioned way of using a hammer. Nice images. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Yasmin Khan 29 December 2013

A fine poem that gives a valuable message through well-chosen imagery.

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