Friday, December 9, 2005

Action Reaction Consequence Guilt Comments

Rating: 4.0

The dryer turns a tumbleweed churn
As we ponder the realm
Of midnight oils bubbling, blurring
In the cascade of rainbows glamour fading.
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David Lacey
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Declan McHenry 09 December 2005

The title really grabbed me David. There are a lot of abstractions and language that adds a flourish but it is not always clear this helps the plot along. I am left thinking this looks nice and sounds nice yet I am puzzled.

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