Action And Reaction Comments

No concern at all for the soul, though?

A bit of a nihilistic take on life, but well-written and bluntly honest.

How about, moderate and end up old, coughing slightly and a bit tubby, but happy and not dead so early? thanks for the smile, Tai

This was too cool.... This gets a 10 from me Jack! Always, Linda

To quote the late great Jim Morrison: 'I don't believe in all that s***, but I'll tell you one thing: I'm going to get my kicks before the whole s***house goes up in flames'. Use your head, end up dead... Keep writing, this is great.

Could get run over tomorrw, end up dead. Another 10 for this one. Keep writing. Love, Fran xx

Very true! There are so many things we ''Can't'' do there's hardly room to take a step without fearing what damages we might be doing to ourself. Very good poem with a great message. Sincerely, Mary