Monday, May 29, 2006

Action And Reaction Comments

Rating: 4.3

Smoke a cigar, end up dead
Eat a steak, end up dead
Drink too much, end up dead
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Unnamed Unnamed 14 September 2015

No concern at all for the soul, though?

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A bit of a nihilistic take on life, but well-written and bluntly honest.

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Tai Chi Italy 11 November 2007

How about, moderate and end up old, coughing slightly and a bit tubby, but happy and not dead so early? thanks for the smile, Tai

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Linda Weischedel 30 October 2007

This was too cool.... This gets a 10 from me Jack! Always, Linda

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Mark Tapley 18 October 2007

To quote the late great Jim Morrison: 'I don't believe in all that s***, but I'll tell you one thing: I'm going to get my kicks before the whole s***house goes up in flames'. Use your head, end up dead... Keep writing, this is great.

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Francesca Johnson 30 May 2006

Could get run over tomorrw, end up dead. Another 10 for this one. Keep writing. Love, Fran xx

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Mary Nagy 29 May 2006

Very true! There are so many things we ''Can't'' do there's hardly room to take a step without fearing what damages we might be doing to ourself. Very good poem with a great message. Sincerely, Mary

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