Friday, June 21, 2013

Action And Reaction? Comments

Rating: 4.7

As confluence we gushed
Demolishing either banks
residual deltas
cleave our course forever, but-
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2018

but- In the same Ocean we merge. yes dear poet. in the same ocean.. every action has an equal and opposite reaction.. thank u dear. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2016

In physics! Action And Reaction are opposite and equal; however, let us put things right on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2015

The poem reminds me of the meeting point of River Niger and River Benue at Lokoja in Nigeria. It's a nice piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Danny Draper 27 June 2013

In flood and inundation there is connection and merging, good concepts considered here.

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Valerie Dohren 26 June 2013

We emerge from the ocean and we shall return to the ocean - well penned.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

Action and reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran is a deep poem as far as the meaning is concerned Delta that divides the rivers yet they merge in one ocean...Me think what faith you have you have to face death and resurrected.only one is accountable of his/her deeds...this is the deep ocean why we keep commotion...better correct oneself before go go

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

Action and reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran is a deep poem as far as the meaning is concerned Delta that divides the rivers yet they merge in one ocean...Me think what faith you have you have to face death and resurrected.only one is accountable of his/her deeds...this is the deep ocean why we keep commotion...better correct oneself before go go

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 23 June 2013

Nice poem, well composed!

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Dave Walker 22 June 2013

A great poem, short and sweet.

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Issa Haikai 22 June 2013

very good! the beauty i like of this truth

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Valsa George 22 June 2013

Cleaving streams finally have to merge with the Ocean! An undeniable truth beautifully stated!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 June 2013

Versed in beautiful brevity - a great truth!

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Wahab Abdul 21 June 2013

very meaningful poem, it has many insuniation, i like it

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