Acting Better Comments

this is not a waste but a fantastic piece!

when someone made a mistake, it's no one's fault, just make it better the next time or as the author said, Act better, improve yourself and you'll be a better soul. Well done, mate.

man learns fro his past blunders nice poem 10+++

Blunders from the past, From trends they have done Are such trends they learn To fix their lives Highly much better. acting better and learning form the past... it is good experience to learn from the experience...10

Life is a good teacher...the more we learn from life the better...you convey your wise thoughts very nicely there Obinna...thanks...10

Life's lessons... nicely written

Well written, you have a unique style

a meaningful verses...nice flow and interesting poem...10

Acting better, polishing life today for a better tomorrow with the guidance of the lessons learnt from yesterday...............10+++

I like your flow it reminds me of my work but your work is a bit complex good job

The first stanza is what I like, the author speaks the truth and believable. One learns from their past mistakes that is the truth, very well said and done. The piece of work though short but very meaningful. Thanks

'Blunders from the past, From trends they have done Are such trends they learn To fix their lives Highly much better' well expressed indeed...I know we must learn lessons from past and make sure those things wont happen again...yet it is easier said than done though, if we have wounds...and pains... anyway I like your poetic expressions nice indeed..love can cast magic and heal wounds and woes...nice