Wednesday, July 4, 2007

Acting. Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is not an act.
There is no contract.
The truth will attract
What is contrary to fact.
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Amanda May Moore
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Melvina Germain 15 July 2007

Well this little baby flowed to the end with an exact rhyming theme, I'm not exactly sure how I feel about that, however I like the abstract feel of this piece. Very good, --Melvina--

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Eric Pennington 09 July 2007

I commented on this on facebook already, but I like this one. I don't know that I'm skillful enough to have the last word sound the same throughout the whole poem. Great job!

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Amanda May Moore

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