Act Of Persistence Comments
How hard is holding on?
When all you get is being pushed away
By the people you love and cherish
A heart wrecking moment it is
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stanza 5: 'Hence a beautiful you create for yourself' Well, I THINK you meant to have a word or words between ' beautiful' & 'you'.
stanza 4: 'Persistence is all you do, mostly with the things that still matter to you.' I suggest 'Persisting'.
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7/18/2025 10:53:06 PM # 1.0.0
4 stars. Let me look at your 2nd poem on PH. bri : )