The new solution sleeps within the vial,
it's song drips like the tentacles of the sun.
Still alone in this dome, waving to creation
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Your line usage is very vivid.
'And so I lay dying in a punctured chariot' is so depictive.
In fact, the entire last stanza of your poem is classic stuff.
You are a remarkable writer. I appreciate your talent(s) .
Great job.
~LSP~
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Your line usage is very vivid. 'And so I lay dying in a punctured chariot' is so depictive. In fact, the entire last stanza of your poem is classic stuff. You are a remarkable writer. I appreciate your talent(s) . Great job. ~LSP~