Sunday, October 5, 2014

Acrylic Sight Comments

Rating: 4.9

"The surgery is a short and quite a painless procedure",
the opthalmologist said. "We apply highly precise laser
technology. You will be out of the clinic in less than an
hour."
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Paul Hartal
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Dorukhan Baris Oguzcan 14 April 2025

Congrats to the surgeon he not only successful but also in the prosses of making an art

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 October 2019

An ophthalmologist's precision embedded in poem is really an innovative theme. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 October 2019

Acrylic Sight painted a beautiful insight excellent poem penned

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 19 October 2019

Excellent poem - so detailed poetic depiction of a surgery and the way a painter looks at the world with his acrylic lenses! Congratulations!

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Kim Barney 19 October 2019

A wonderful poem. Congrats for having it selected AGAIN as member poem of the day!

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Bharati Nayak 19 October 2019

The beginning of the poem made me as fearful as the artist who was going to have his eye surgery.At the end it was great relief to know that it was a very successful surgery that gave the painter a new life . Congratulations for a beautiful Poem of the Day!

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James Mclain 19 October 2019

What irony as well forgot that sorry Paul.

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James Mclain 19 October 2019

Seeing is believing a well deserved poem of the day Congrats and thank you for sharing.

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Harley White 19 October 2019

This paints the situation lyrically and expresses well the preciousness of sight...

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Lodigiana Poetess 19 October 2019

Absolutely beautiful piece of work! a joy to read from beginning to end and a lovely completion with the last word! Full marks sir! and a worthy Poem of the Day Lodigiana x

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 October 2019

Muse of a surgery! ! Mind of an Artist. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kevin Patrick 26 April 2019

A detailed and heartfelt poem, the story has a lot of emotional weight, if this is your life the kudos for laying it down for us to experience. To be an artist and suffer cataracts is denying oxygen for life. The ending was heart was triumphant, Im glad the artist was given a second sight, and we the reader were given this wonderful story. Fantastic piece.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

CONGRATULATIONS! An amazing and informative poem is selected as the poem of the day. Magnificent beauty of nature motivates many. His acrylic painting is definitely captured well...10

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Morgan Michaels. 19 October 2018

FYI: Insurers don't pay for laser-assisted cataractectomies, alas. Ophthalmologists deny it offers any particular advantage over the traditional approach. Except for certain conditions like zonular dysplasia.

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Kelly Kurt 19 October 2018

I enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats, Paul.

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Kim Barney 19 October 2018

Very nice, Paul. My wife just had this surgery so this poem was especially meaningful to me. Congratulations for having this selected as member poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 October 2018

Paul, such a touching poem of the day........... Congrats for being chosen.10++++++++++++

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