Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Acrostic: Summer Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunshine brightens up my day
Under the shade of a giant acacia tree
Memories of childhood flashed back to me
Mama’s girlie voice I heard today
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 April 2010

‘…Summer memories kept coming back like a broken record ‘ Lamenting and grieved memories are well blended with pleasant memory …well composed 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Eyan Desir 28 March 2010

very nice well written

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Lady Grace 26 March 2010

memories, sometimes it gives heartaches sometimes it makes us glad... words in ur piece are absolutely correct..nicely done....as the lyrics says''memries, light the corners of my mind...scattered pictures of the sniles we left behind''...whew.....oh memories...

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Marieta Maglas 24 March 2010

You used great power words here. Embedded suggestions are an important aspect because they provide a very great amount of sensibility within your poem.Lovely to read..

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