Acrostic Sonnet On The Sonnets On The Sonnet Comments

This is a valiant effort. The acrostic part is perfect. With some more work and thought you could make it iambic pentameter. You could also make it a little more coherent. It is very difficult to follow the train of thought in some places. Eg. " to fill New chapter, verse, in ego's copyright." doesn't quite make sense.

Love an acrostic. On canvas there is painterly, but in poetry sentiment or constipated stress give way to twee. Some write for points deluded by jack pot wealth. Others prefer to toil at their art or sullen craft and write to write driven by its relentless wanting curse.