Wednesday, June 11, 2014

Acrostic Poetry: Months Of The Year! Comments

Rating: 4.7

January:

Jamming, freezing, cold month
After fine December days
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Mahvish Omer 25 January 2018

Very good writing it was amazing written

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M Asim Nehal 15 November 2015

Nicely written poem.....Liked it.

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From the fresh air of February to the mangoes of May. Well done my friend!

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Unwritten Soul 05 July 2014

12 months delivered hiddenly contain seasons influenced by the sun_Soul

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Neela Nath Das 03 July 2014

A wee-constructed lovely poem. Each and every season has its own beauty and importance in our life.This poem is fabricated finely.10+++++

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Quiet interesting poem Shahzia. Your write up had made every month delightful. Each month is special in some way and we keep on waiting for each month, as each month add some fragrance to our life. Beautiful poem and filled with artistic and yummy words. Loved each month, the way you have portrayed something different. Loved it.

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Saadat Tahir 20 June 2014

Fresh, different, interesting Nicely rhymed and amply lucid… Send waves of pleasure and feelings across the vista and ones body...almost experiencing the montage of a year Great poetry! …and i have not the knowledge nor the wherewithal to access it on pure poetic merit... and you as my de-facto teacher in poetic discourse know that well… liked very much GOD speed.

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Amitava Sur 20 June 2014

WOW' - Thank you Shahzia for this informative poem. Truly I didn't know those nitty griity of every months as you detailed here, thanks a lot. Keep well.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 June 2014

Aha a rich poem splendid months acrostic of the Pakistani seasons! Here in Tanz, we hav winter in june. I enjoyd d jasmine line n liked how u say, 'year in infancy'.

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Hardik Vaidya 16 June 2014

Your poem is mellifluous as is the change of months. Nature walks and waltzes her way through time while we sit and admire the greatest fashion show on earth. How ruthless is life that springs from yellow and pink paper of business news papers, screaming with stocks, results and forced upon dividends, almost lashing out as Neanderthals on an art sublime, we murmur Q1 Q2 Q3 Q4, the four measly quarters of our material existence. Well written Shazia Batool.

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Kanav Justa 15 June 2014

, , , wonderful digest of all the months that we have, , , , july might have got offended though in this write, , , : P

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 June 2014

You have covered all the months and what they represent. Love is in the air for all in April. Every month has its own uniqueness to savor. Beautiful poem. This acrostic verse of time is nice and you have acknowledged another poet's idea. Thank you.

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Tribhawan Kaul 14 June 2014

You have brought out every month's charm (as it appears in your country) excellently. Enjoyed reading it.

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Valsa George 11 June 2014

Beautiful Acrostic on the months of the year! ..... You have squeezed in the beauty and essence of the 365 days of the year....and made a delicious drink.! This delectable beverage is served handy in goblets for everyone to savour.... There are of course some difference in climatic conditions.... In Kerala, July is no more a hot month, it is the peak time of monsoon showers! A good job, Shahzia! Kudos.....

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Dinesan Madathil 11 June 2014

It is absolute compromise with seasons for some.. It is otherwise a matter of being guided by optimism... I wish if we had 13 or more number of months, Shahzia.

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