January:
Jamming, freezing, cold month
After fine December days
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From the fresh air of February to the mangoes of May. Well done my friend!
12 months delivered hiddenly contain seasons influenced by the sun_Soul
A wee-constructed lovely poem. Each and every season has its own beauty and importance in our life.This poem is fabricated finely.10+++++
Quiet interesting poem Shahzia. Your write up had made every month delightful. Each month is special in some way and we keep on waiting for each month, as each month add some fragrance to our life. Beautiful poem and filled with artistic and yummy words. Loved each month, the way you have portrayed something different. Loved it.
Fresh, different, interesting Nicely rhymed and amply lucid… Send waves of pleasure and feelings across the vista and ones body...almost experiencing the montage of a year Great poetry! …and i have not the knowledge nor the wherewithal to access it on pure poetic merit... and you as my de-facto teacher in poetic discourse know that well… liked very much GOD speed.
WOW' - Thank you Shahzia for this informative poem. Truly I didn't know those nitty griity of every months as you detailed here, thanks a lot. Keep well.
Aha a rich poem splendid months acrostic of the Pakistani seasons! Here in Tanz, we hav winter in june. I enjoyd d jasmine line n liked how u say, 'year in infancy'.
Your poem is mellifluous as is the change of months. Nature walks and waltzes her way through time while we sit and admire the greatest fashion show on earth. How ruthless is life that springs from yellow and pink paper of business news papers, screaming with stocks, results and forced upon dividends, almost lashing out as Neanderthals on an art sublime, we murmur Q1 Q2 Q3 Q4, the four measly quarters of our material existence. Well written Shazia Batool.
, , , wonderful digest of all the months that we have, , , , july might have got offended though in this write, , , : P
You have covered all the months and what they represent. Love is in the air for all in April. Every month has its own uniqueness to savor. Beautiful poem. This acrostic verse of time is nice and you have acknowledged another poet's idea. Thank you.
You have brought out every month's charm (as it appears in your country) excellently. Enjoyed reading it.
Beautiful Acrostic on the months of the year! ..... You have squeezed in the beauty and essence of the 365 days of the year....and made a delicious drink.! This delectable beverage is served handy in goblets for everyone to savour.... There are of course some difference in climatic conditions.... In Kerala, July is no more a hot month, it is the peak time of monsoon showers! A good job, Shahzia! Kudos.....
It is absolute compromise with seasons for some.. It is otherwise a matter of being guided by optimism... I wish if we had 13 or more number of months, Shahzia.
Very good writing it was amazing written