Sunday, July 8, 2012

Acrostic Poems Comments

Rating: 5.0

Earthquakes:

E-arth shudders on its hinge
A-ll experience that terrific punch
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

Your acrostic poems are always lovely and I love reading these. Reading this poem again I am glad. Ghostly noise is heard around. Amazing sharing this is.

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Kee Thampi 12 February 2019

Hounds of Ghost may terrific to my ear G-hastly noises heard around H-aunted houses with thickets surround O-ld castles where mysteries abound S-tarved faces greatly confound T-errible bats worse than hounds

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

Whether we see ghost or not it is very mysterious to know about it. Here you have so incisively inscribed about ghost in an acrostic. The symptoms of storm have been impressively painted here. All three parts of the poem are beautiful.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

Part...1 When earthquakes come our earth shudders roads crack, rubble creates heap where men scream in pain and after shocks and seismic waves many people meet the death. All these events and pitiful picturesque have been so touchingly inscribed through acrostic form.

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Indira Renganathan 27 June 2018

Perfect and picturesque....all three are excellent...very interesting acrostics

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Ovi Odiete 28 September 2015

i love acrostic poems...tho i have never tried...writing Great piece.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

Please read thoughts in place of thoghts. Sorry.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

V-olcano of thoghts A-rdent presenatation L-ava of words S-pray of beauty A-mazing always

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Acrostic so artistically crafted......Valsa......and so creative I am overwhelmed to see how it rhymes........ simply exceptional

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Chandra Thiagarajan 10 February 2013

i generally love acrostic poems and I chanced to come across your three SPLENDID acrostic poems.All the the poems are wonderful with music flowing in them.

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Danny Draper 20 September 2012

Good stuff and always fun the acrostic, to write and read.

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The beauty of acrostic poems has thus been well envisaged. It is nice that your ghost has found his/her place between the earthquake and the storm! I am awaiting the tale of a good ghost pale in look and cast in a weak frame loitering around the castles of the man yet to die.

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Barb Mcavaney 14 August 2012

I love fiddling with acrostic poems I think they are fascinating.

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Neela Nath Das 12 July 2012

So nice poem! also wrote an Acrostic-INVENTION.Yours is more beautiful than mine. Loved this job.

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Elena Sandu 10 July 2012

Well done dear friend, yes we have to kneel and accept the supremacy of mother Nature over humans. We are doing much more harm to her than she is doing to us when in anger. Let's hope will come a day for us we can understand and treat our mother fairly well.

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