Monday, March 19, 2012

Across These Oceans.... Comments

Rating: 4.8

You are my brother,
Even though we're
Miles apart.
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo
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Roseann Shawiak 26 July 2014

Beautiful poem, you have woven together people from all over the world, in different circumstances, and created a fabric of poetical serenity, bringing all together, Siyabonga. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Savita Tyagi 16 July 2014

What a lovely poem. If we can find just one thread in a fabric that unites us across the oceans that fabric is worth cherishing. My best wishes to you.

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Susan Lacovara 29 April 2014

I am across the ocean, but through the sharing of poetry and pleasantries, I am a friend. What a beautifully symphony of your soul you have written. Magnificent. I send a wish of PEACE

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Kanav Justa 02 November 2013

Such a great poem.... a very matyre write.... liked the theme of your poem and also the way you wrote this one

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Zandile Zoya 30 July 2013

far from my reach yet close to my heart you belong, i myt not have seen your smile nor heard d soft sound of ur vyc still with your words my soul has seen at all.... tjo hay mfana wase Durbn uyayenza into yakho halala bhuti

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Ofentse Mercy Hajane 08 April 2013

It's our nature to try and dabble in much love from our fellow men. But sometimes we look ourselves in the mirror, and we see those we call our brother, our friends, our men. This merely shows that we are one. We are only stardust... a universe experiencing itself through you and I. Great peom here. I really fell fond of it.

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So Close 11 October 2012

hands off you sir...really superb! »so close«

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Madina Morris 14 September 2012

She is Madina. I have a brother, he is Siyabonga :) I really love this poem. Nice brother dear, very nice ;)

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 12 August 2012

You are right, the whole world is connected. What you see in others, they are in you, because we are all children of the Universe. Only not too many people wants to accept it.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 23 June 2012

Even though i've never seen your smile. But your fingers Do the talking, And your voice Warms my heart... we are all citizens of this world :)

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Shihabudheen K J 04 May 2012

Wonderful jus human n inspiring.we r all brothers n sisters the international lovers of love n poems.i love you all.

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Shihabudheen K J 04 May 2012

Wonderful jus human n inspiring.we r all brothers n sisters the international lovers of love n poems.i love you all.

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Shihabudheen K J 04 May 2012

Wonderful jus human n inspiring.we r all brothers n sisters the international lovers of love n poems.i love you all.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 April 2012

Your heart is pure And so your love and friendship/Great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Hans Vr 05 April 2012

My brother, I am touched by this. So true, I felt often that close freindship, that brother and sisterhood of the poets on this site. We know each other, we feel together, even though we do not know each other's faces or voices. I like this poem very, very much. Fantastic, Siya, my brother. Thanks and very best regards Hans

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He speaks words of no Doubt, he roars of a sound equivalent to that of a lion He spills love to those who derseve He draws a smile to a us And so drives a mile thE visons of poetry He intergrates the belovely mendicants of worD He Scatters our hearts beyond options He is a brother to many He is a mento to me His lines by each verse teach me a lesson in each day He is a friend to many But he is the best to me He resembles a true spiritual poet, And we all thank him for that Bra Siya, This is a wonderful write.... Now I have two Poems to seek motivation, the one written by Jaqcui and the other by You... God bless you Mkhatshwa The_African_Son

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 26 March 2012

Its a wonderful piece, I enjoyed It this poem is one of the best. Much blessing be healthy

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Elena Sandu 25 March 2012

Thank you, this is a poem to give the wings to fly towards the better human world. This is how we shall feel and treat each other, thank you, brother.

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Aman Sa 24 March 2012

Great job, the humanity is given a flow, that boundless it reaches to me, for i am on of your brothers, across the oceans across the seas

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Wahab Abdul 23 March 2012

''Your age is just a number, Your skin colour, Is one of the rainbow colours.'' brilliant! very humanitarian.....these are the better senses, i wish these senses will prevail in the world.... the war mongers and man haters should read this poem and the poem should be on the top of 500 poems list..

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