Across The Water Comments
She navigates on a stormy sea,
Of love washed waters,
The howling wind shouts out about her loss,
Her ex-lover the man she called the boss,
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She navigates on a stormy sea, Of love washed waters... Amazing imagery within makes this poem very special and heart touching. Truly composed from core of heart and mind. Beautiful one.
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
At least, a Dolphin shows her love; despite of her rough times a Dolphin brightens up her soul! Well done, Hazel!
safe landing after storm- navigator needs no introduction- good penning madam
Navigating on a stormy sea and proceeding ahead is definitely difficult. The dolphin returns her soul to lightness, Of her childhood, to feel the freedom this definitely strengthens thoughts of presentation in beautiful way. Each word dances with meaning and touches heart on reading. Nice poem shared really.
Jealous foes are obstructing her way but she has faithful and loyal friends and she will find an island of happiness. A beautiful write.
She is searching for an island in this sea of greatness, A sanctuary of hope to bring the brightness, For her again to feel sure, To light her way across the water. I hope she find the way across the water. Beautiful write.
Across the wind tossed sea, she is navigating to cut across the rising waves and reach a safe shore or at least find an island! Any way she is not dispirited as she hopes that brightness will light her path! Even the sea creatures are quite amiable to her and she has the strength of the love of her 'boss'! Great write!
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7/26/2025 10:45:53 AM # 1.0.0
I love this dramatic quest for light across the stormy sea of life. How glad I am you chose a dolphin, my favourite animal, to be her friend and help her soul find its way. You and dolphins have something in common: a great empathy and compassion for others.