Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Across The Universe Comments

Rating: 3.3

This was inspired by the Beatles song of the same name

Words are flowing out like endless streams into a paper cup
They stand and sigh and soon they slip away
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P.R. Prosper
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 24 November 2008

P.R. - This feels like Simon and Garfunkle's 'someone left the cake out in the rain' sweet and flowing! Yummy. Best wishes - Cheryl

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 October 2008

Insightful! ........................10+

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