Across The Universe Comments

I gave it dag-gum 10. Beautifully written. Sad, but it's gonna be okay. S.

This is amazing. Its like another poem I've read which is one of my favorites. ITs called ' Flight' from Kristina Londy. I love both and are just beautifully written

sky would rain crystalline tears of joy, as I have left My home on earth eternally-and found a new home Inside the world of my imaginings- Great write..amazing flow of words here. I specially like the excerpt above of your poem.Sounds really brilliant.Well done and thanks for sharing.

Dear poet im very impressed with the universe you are writing this poem was so beautiful im jealous from the sky to come down the mountain are all good choice