Friday, January 16, 2009

Across The Mountains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Towards the east and towards the west,
I come looking for you all to admire our friendship,
far across the ocean so wide, so wide that the tide
of sorrrow could not combine with our everlasting friendship,
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Savio Antonio Vogt
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so ok.. you re a great wrriter, thats my piece. now peace! 10+++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 January 2009

Amazing imagery, beautiful start and sad ending.

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Liz Williams 28 January 2009

oh, it's so sad, happy and then sad. I like it.

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