Saturday, October 8, 2005

Across The Main Comments

Rating: 3.0

She floats.
Above old shingles
and windswept tops
of lonely trees.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Linda Preston 22 October 2005

Hello Herbert. I love those opening lines they have a haunting quality.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 08 October 2005

This is about a poet on this site. H

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Theorem Thetruthserum 08 October 2005

I liked it...very good and I agree with Mahnaz...it has a nice soft beat to it.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 08 October 2005

It is a nice rhytmnic poem.....there's a soft beat in the words.

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