Friday, June 20, 2014

Across The Grays And Blues Comments

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He looked across the grays and blues
of odysseys and crescent moons
into a distance simplified
with fewer words less sanctified
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Alven L. Robinson
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Delicate Heart 21 June 2014

A well written piece of poetry, wonderfully woven, a sense of musical rhyme holds the reader's attention and feelings all through the poem. I like best the last couple of lines. ten out of ten................

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