Across The Field Comments

This is a beautiful, well-crafted poem. I like the feeling and image that it captures about a melancholy memory. Keep up the great work. I also invite you to read and comment.

A beatufull poem well written that captures the feeling of someone looking back.

This is a beautiful poem I would like to request you to read my poem a favorite cousin and leave your kind comments Thank You

Good rhyming throughout the poem and a good picture of the sun rising from the horizon.

Andrew, very sad and emotional write gently penned with mother nature comparing fall with being such a sad time of year especially if you have experienced or about to a loss.... Very touching with much imagery.....Bonnie

very sad man, but poignant...still, i would say that you have plenty of time to find new love...great metaphors here

Love...happens often when we least expect it, , though sometimes if we know where to look we can venture forward in it's light A great poem Andrew Love duncan X

you are awesome..your poems are beautifully written....i enjoy reading them

Your poem is very touching and true. Its very beautiful. Keep writing!

To unmet longings and desires. Nice one, thanks, Andrew.

Great write Andrew! Enjoyed reading this poem! ! Keep inking them! ! (10) ! ! Thad