Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Across The Divide Of Time Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sleep, my son, and dream of when
we will trace the alpine glens,
and walk upon the wildest ways
where bears have trod, but seldom men.
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Seamus O' Brian
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Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2021

Oh, Wow absolutely breath taking! .. Such beautiful sentiments! .. Such beautiful dreams! .. I'm so glad these times you got to share together! .. How wonderful! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Laurie Van Der Hart 12 July 2019

How many fathers write poems for their sons? What beautiful thoughts and wishes, made all the more precious by the fact that you’ve actually done those amazing things, and more, with your son. Such a well-crafted poem. My eldest son recently graduated from school and I made him a photo album of his life so far - so many memories. You might like to read one I wrote about him called “Conversation with a Bear.”

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 July 2019

A well composed heartfelt poem of the day. Congrats for being picked...10++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 July 2019

I can imagine all the things and free times you have spent with your beloved son. I adore the photos added, such handsome son and good looking father, I love to look at photographs and especially these ones connected with the amazing poem. The poem has exciting rays of happiness, love and a good life. CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A 10 Full Score and much, much more. God's Blessings in Abundance.

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Lyn Paul 11 July 2019

To have shared so much with a child and know there is so much more is amazing. A fabulous bond you have. Wonderful words and a great story in the photos too.

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Kim Barney 11 July 2019

Very nice poem, and the selection as member poem of the day is well-deserved. Congratulations!

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Beautiful poem... congrats on being selected Poem Of The day.. a ten from me..

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 July 2019

Very nice poem where you have sewn together many dreams for your son. Each stanza is very nice to read and very well crafted. Keep dropping such beautiful poem. Congrats.

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A beautiful lullab. Thank you. Congratulations being PODy...10

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banamala sen 11 July 2019

A lovely poem about an affectionate father spending precious time with his son in the natural surroundings! The picture in the last four lines touches my heart! Congratulations on your poem being selected as Poem Of The Day!

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Bharati Nayak 11 July 2019

A brilliant poem that has contained many of your dreams you dreamt for your son while he was a baby.Now you are a proud father that your son has grown as you wished.congratulations for this wonderful poem being selected as the Poem of the Day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 July 2019

A fabulous life song coming from a father during a day dream when his young son sleeps in his laps. The dream shows the exciting things the father would like to share with the grown-up son for cementing thick bondage and relationship between the duo. Well deserved poem of the Day. Heartiest congratulations

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2019

the dream your dream has come truly to decorate the future brightly.......///

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Rini shibu 11 July 2019

Congratulations seamus for poem of the day..beautiful poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 July 2019

Of future days ahead! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adeeb Alfateh 11 July 2019

In far off days we will stand toe to toe, as man to man and I shall pause as you pass by to watch with silent, father's pride. excellent write great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Manpreet Singh 11 July 2019

I am sure your son is a very lucky child who will grow up into a very fine man like yourself. Its fascinating and full of imagery. Well wishes.

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Deepak Manchanda 11 July 2019

Dreaming of days to come between father and son. A powerful poem! Liked it.

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Denis Mair 11 July 2019

Your dreams flung themselves into the future and became reality. This reminds me of golden hours I spent with my father on weekend drives.

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Jane Campion 11 July 2019

From the heart with pride. Congratulations on your POD.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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