Monday, October 29, 2018

Across Mongolia.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The noise barriers staring at you
exactly as you fly over Mongolia
on the way to Down Under-
the Great Wall is staring at you
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2018

The noise barriers staring at you exactly as you fly over Mongolia on the way to Down Under- the Great Wall is staring at you......your experience is brilliantly reflected here in this beautiful poem....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

Thank you so much for your precious comment and for your appreciated compliment. And for the 10. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon thee and thy beloved family, Dillip. Amen.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2018

The age- old wall looks! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

Thanks for commenting, Edward. G.B.U. in Abundance. Amen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2018

Flying over Mongolia you have experienced a lots of things. The Great Wall is staring at you. Memories have gathered and you have experienced a lot of things. Favorite bite is taken with positive motivation. An excellent poem is well penned from memory.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

ONE: Only when the sight from that highest point is crystal clear, we could see the gigantic Great Wall battlements as smallest and tiny Indonesian snacks. I had flown over Mongolia more than once, but only grey dark clouds could I see. Thank you so much for the valuable feedback, worthy comments and lovely compliments.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

TWO: Thank you so much too for the precious 10 for the Vote. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon thee and thy beloved family, Sir, Amen, gratefully yours, Sylvia Frances Chan from the NL.

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Kostas Lagos 29 October 2018

I would never thought the Great Wall as a snack! Loved it!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

.........Till you one day will fly over Mongolia and it is crystal clear weather, then you will remember my poem about Mongolia, Kostas. Thank you so much, that you dropped in at my poem site

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