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Wow you translated this extraordinary poem eloquently and excellently. Kudos for this interesting muse. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

Very nice poem dear poet.../// Read and comment.. It is the only way to remain connected..thanks

Ox broke the knees, and fell on ribs... In the eyes with the light still at no glance magnification with the sky the shutter door frozen. across the way, left for nowhere.

The shutter door here and there ominous dilemma, continence up in funeral dumps.

Very nice sir sorry I wrongl addresed you as ma'am Wrong linking perhaps