Sunday, July 19, 2009

Across Comments

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Across

Across the skies a meteor flies,
it flashes, sails, falls, then dies.
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Wesley Mincin
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Jennifer K 06 July 2010

your poem fllows beautifully. nice work

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you show life everywhere...a good flowing poem

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 July 2009

Across this bridge is a paradise, .......What a beautiful line, Wesley. Nice poem. Keep up the good work. Best Wishes Naseer

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Autumn Jones 21 July 2009

It is very well thought out and when I read out loud the words just jumped across my tongue like they were meant to be there. Very good. -Autumn

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last two lines are splendid............

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