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Very touching, Bilal. A promise of great poetry to come.

holy crap! ! I love it! ! ! seriously seriously love it! great job.

that poem was great.. i almost cried.. i know exactly how it feels

You express yourself well. I feel like so many people could relate to this. Another great poem. =)

Bilal, I’m Leaving A Letter Or two about your poem: Believe that it’s sure to get better And sorrows will soon be going. A bit trite, perhaps, but experience is talking here. At your age life can seem not worth living sometimes, but at least you’ve got it all before you. A great poem, though – keep on writing. Richard

emotional poem.. i like it.

Great poem excellent discription keep up the good work

Broken Innocence Left A Legacy, Turning a child into a ghost Life through my blood shot eyes Now to that lets all toast My Favorite part..... Nice Lines....

Aww, that was well written. My favorite part was the 'It's better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all'.

i like the way you express yourself, another great write

great job :) you are trully talented! it's a very beautiful poem! !

okey, this one I love....it's great. I don't really like rhyme schemes, but appart from that, I love it. I'm putting this one on my wall. :)

gr8t job again. one lil thing.. i noticed it in my own work, sometime following the 'rule', rhyming patterns etc, take away froom emotion and replaces the stronger feeling with the rhyme, dont let that stop you from reachign the peaks of expression. Leslie

i love it all :) you are very good at what you do please keep it up

Solitude can give you introspective thoughts.A good way to get rid of loneliness is to trust your inner-guide-your Angel.You can't always depend on people but you can depend on your inner strength.I personally don't mind my own company.At least I can think then with no demands from other people.Good poem capturing the pain of loneliness....but we never walk alone...never...as long as you believe in yourself.Smile--I gave you another ten.