Friday, October 23, 2009

'Acquired Label' Comments

Rating: 4.7

Being I am..
a child of Adam
as on the day
I, intented to step out
...
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Afzal Shauq
COMMENTS
Leah Ayliffe 21 November 2009

Great poem, powerful words!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 October 2009

I am an athiest, I think your poem is top draw.

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Rachel Butler 30 October 2009

'Alas.., the rigid beings of my own birth town' Rachel Ann Butler

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Sandhya S N 30 October 2009

Brilliant expression regards sandhya

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Ala Elouri 29 October 2009

Short, breif but I like it! . Nice poem and keep up your work. :) I Hope you will become famous in this website and people see your talent.

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thylane loubry 28 October 2009

i love the way you epress you feelings sir :)

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Seraza Uzuner 28 October 2009

Nice piece of work, I appreciate.

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Anju Addanki 28 October 2009

A well written and short meanigful one.

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Sahar Sahar 27 October 2009

I like this poem and it is wonderfully written.....when we step out of home, which is our paradise we think about some very important prospects, being a mature son of Adam you feel some responsibilities....

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Amita Lama 27 October 2009

short and nice one.... keep it up

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Christina Phan 27 October 2009

well written n short fanastic job 10+

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 27 October 2009

Being I am.. a child of Adam.. well written and well expressed... your verses pass on meaningful messages! I liked so much the last sanza. Thanks For Sharing

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Mehreen Mujeeb 27 October 2009

short and very effective

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Elsee Daniel 27 October 2009

well penned...good diction....10+

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 October 2009

Nice poem, Ireally enjoyed reading it, thx for sharing...10+

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Mona Martinez 26 October 2009

very good. short and simple but through it shine a good point of view.

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Connie Tallada 26 October 2009

Wisely expressed poem, with little words but plenty of thoughts and ideas. wisely penned..10

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Karen LaRose 26 October 2009

i really enjoyed this and i share a similar belief. read my poem 'Love is My Religion'

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iam anass 26 October 2009

its a very sweet poem i love it and i might add u to my gmail

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****Hanaring Tamara.. 26 October 2009

i read this poem before but was un able to comment..this is another account just to comment..i say that always who are faithful to any issue or believe they face all kind of accusing so don't worry this mean that your thoughts already did spread so well, , a beautiful poem...

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Afzal Shauq

Afzal Shauq

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