Being I am..
a child of Adam
as on the day
I, intented to step out
...
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'Alas.., the rigid beings of my own birth town' Rachel Ann Butler
Short, breif but I like it! . Nice poem and keep up your work. :) I Hope you will become famous in this website and people see your talent.
I like this poem and it is wonderfully written.....when we step out of home, which is our paradise we think about some very important prospects, being a mature son of Adam you feel some responsibilities....
Being I am.. a child of Adam.. well written and well expressed... your verses pass on meaningful messages! I liked so much the last sanza. Thanks For Sharing
Nice poem, Ireally enjoyed reading it, thx for sharing...10+
very good. short and simple but through it shine a good point of view.
Wisely expressed poem, with little words but plenty of thoughts and ideas. wisely penned..10
i really enjoyed this and i share a similar belief. read my poem 'Love is My Religion'
i read this poem before but was un able to comment..this is another account just to comment..i say that always who are faithful to any issue or believe they face all kind of accusing so don't worry this mean that your thoughts already did spread so well, , a beautiful poem...
Great poem, powerful words!