Monday, May 11, 2009

Acquire Light Greatly Comments

Rating: 4.1

I go to acquire
Joy hearty with light
Glowing so greatly.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 February 2010

if my literature professor has read this, he would say 'Repetition of words are not really commonly used when writing a poem but sometimes repetition makes the poem more interesting and beautiful' nice write!

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Kesav Easwaran 14 October 2009

yes; it's all about life...acquire light...axquire enlightenment from every where...good work...thanks...10

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Bob Blackwell 07 September 2009

Lovely poem, if we can live by the light, we are on happy way.

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Yelena M. 05 September 2009

Obinna, a wonderful title. The light shines through your poem, indeed! :) Moreover, a healing light.Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Y.M.

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Sandra Fowler 30 June 2009

Very inspiring. Wishing you the light of inspiration always.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Carol Gall 30 May 2009

a beautiful poem 10 gently

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