Friday, May 22, 2009

Acquiescence Comments

Rating: 2.8

The questions you asked but to which I had no reply
But I wished I had, the replies to
The questions you had asked but never really asked
Remained in my life, murmuring every now and again
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Fay Slimm 25 May 2009

Beautiful but wistfully wrought - - a fine piece of thought provoking poetry... your honesty with word as always shines through every line.... greetings from Fay 10 + +

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Bob Blackwell 23 May 2009

Rani, as usual your poem is well written but this time its content a little puzzling, sad but not sad, mad but not too mad, pleading but not pleading, but in acquiescence? Love your writing. Regards Bob

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