Friday, May 30, 2008

Acquaintances Comments

Rating: 4.4

I don't really care who you are,
Or what you say
about who you know.
Your pleasing pleasantries
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David DeSantis
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Vidi Writes 13 June 2008

Prejudice forms when there is no acquaintance Tolerance glooms out in association Obligation a part of social contact Fish can’t survive without water Human has to swim in the society. Then how far we can avoid the acquaintances? May be until our apathy towards associate dissolve. And the writing shows the mood of humankind You and me are not exceptions But, the quicker the realization Better the prospects in life.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 11 June 2008

Acquaintances are good You start to follow your mood And hold it for few reasons For there may be a treasure that is unfold in each reason Great work David, Cate

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Flora Gillingham 11 June 2008

I think I must know him! And does he sometimes look over your shoulder to see whether there is someone more important to speak to? Well rid! Well written! Fx

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Rani Turton 09 June 2008

We could call this one 'the psychology of polite chatter' and it is oh so true! Thanks David.

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Casey Gauthier 09 June 2008

this is quite great. good writing.

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Original Unknown Girl 05 June 2008

Hmmm... sounds like one selfish mf to me...Your well rid David. HG: -) xx

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Jurietta Duraan 04 June 2008

GREAT POEM! ! ! acquaintances like these are like dead wood.... only good for making a massive bonfire.... you will see the fire dancing in your own eyes, giving you more pleasure than the monotone 'hello'.

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Broken Peaces 31 May 2008

It is amazing how poets search for hours for the right word, others talk till the mind goes numb, well written poem enjoyed Chris

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Ivor Hogg 30 May 2008

If only they would stop for breath and let you get a word in edgeways Or perhaps they are thinking alon the same lines. I observed two women talking neither was answering what the other said just waiting for a pause a continuing where she left off Two entirely different ' conversations' or rather two monologs which needed an audience ivor

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Fred Babbin 30 May 2008

Yes, you and Dorothy Parker. I know exactly how you feel.

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Lynda Robson 30 May 2008

Hope you feel better now you have got that off your chest lol, and by doing so we have had the chance to read this great poem, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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LOVEFOOL Aka 30 May 2008

pure venom in words I find expresing raw emotion like this to be a very liberating experance Good stuff Nik

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