Wednesday, October 19, 2005

Acne Vulgaris Comments

Rating: 3.5

Bow your head, angel,
Guide my lips to your crown,
Keep them far from your face,
Far from the battleground.
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Francis Santaquilani
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Scotty Dogg 13 December 2011

Terrible poem! Good job! You're old and ugly I'll bet. Look in the mirror, Lady.

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Francis Santaquilani 05 December 2017

It's a rather selfish and shallow moment being expressed in the poem. He/she is conflicted. I'm not a lady by the way.

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