Thursday, May 22, 2008

Acknowledgement Comments

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The death knell sounds and echoes round
the confines of the burial ground
The tolling bell seems to foretell.
Life will become a lonely hell.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Catherine Rica Cosico 03 June 2008

Oh! my....you made my heart cry....lovely poem...you brought me into the flow! ! ! Like a childs in a knights armor...

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2008

This poem reminds me of Lord Tennyson's famous poem ‘Home they brought her warrior dead’…A fitting acknowledgement opens out the barrel of sorrow here. A loss big and sad equally to both… ‘Her race is run and she has won’…most touching and painful this line, Ivor…

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David Desantis 30 May 2008

very sad and beautiful poem....this isn't based on personal experience is it. I saw that it says 'the love between two women'....either way, very sad, im sorry if this is about a personal loss

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Rani Turton 29 May 2008

Amazingly painful to read. The scene remains fixed in the reader's mind. Thanks for writing this one.

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~ Jon London ~ 25 May 2008

A love so strong, the very earth would bounce...lovely piece Ivor...you are the master when it comes to writing true unconditional themes. Best wishes my friend Jon

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John Thorkild Ellison 22 May 2008

A very beautiful description of true love. Another moving poem. Thank you Ivor. Best wishes, John.

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