Acid Comments

wow...♥ fun to read and an amazing description...☻

Your choice of words and images made this a fun poem to read. Hope it really didn't happen.

Are all acid trips so well structured? At least you remembered it - after his opium trip Coleridge remembered all of Kubla Khan but was interrupted by a man 'from Porlock' before he could write it down. By the time he left he'd almost completely forgotten it. Fx

David, I've never done a trip, but you paint such a vivid picture I don't need to! Thank you.

David, I enjoyed your trip, I personally cannot relate to this but seeing it through your mind is enough, great imagery here, Lynda xx

Here the key word is 'lost'. The word 'while', isolated and recurring, is like refrain. If one thinks about 'Odyssey', can go to the Ninth Chapter to the Loto Eaters. Then to the Fifteenth to Telemachus.

Lovingly Said David, :) :) :) :)

full of the weirdness that some encounter continually. you paint a twisted picture. i really enjoyed this. keep on keepin' on.

Not so much a stream of vitrolic but of natures Hallucinogenic escapades... I like very much

Love this piece, an adventure in to a world, that only few have bared witness to........great visuals, feels real.. Great work my friend all the very best J.L

tripping without the acid here as this run of images ignites the senses - movement, texture, sound and vision... flows well too and the connections surface after the second read. jx

Interesting write, very trippy! Like it! HG: -) xx

Can I have some please? t x